Feedback from Teacher

I have shown my first draft to my teacher Becky to get some helpful feedback so that I know what steps I need to take next in terms of editing my video.

She said:

• she liked my editing
• she enjoyed my video
• there are not any major improvements I need to make

Despite this, I have plans to add a vintage effect on the flashback scenes to make the video look more professional overall and to reflect the idea that the scenes are from the past. However, I will first ask people in my target audience and outside my target audience to answer my audiene feedback questionaire to see if there are any other imporvements I should make and whether the vintage effect will really help the narrative to be conveyed.